07-05-2019, 11:16 AM
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Originally Posted by WTF99 View Post
Bro trust me when I say this that I really don't want to be an asshole here but you need to calm down and let Ajaniv write the way he wants to. Seems to me you want a boring cliched husband wife sex story but clearly this isn't that. Kamna is slutty!! Pure and simple but she also loves her husband and that m is the only thing that's keeping her from becoming a complete bitch. She wants her husband but also loves the attention of other men. If the writer made then hook up so fast then what's the point after that. Kamna gets her husband back and she stops messing around and end of story. There are no more adventures. So if you want those boring kind of romance stories there are plenty of those out there. And your concerns about this story turning into regular bored house wife story is baseless. Ajaniv is focusing so much on character development so that it doesn't become that. I don't know if you're over enthusiastic or simply like boring stuff but please try to understand the characters and something about the progression of this story before just demanding stuff. Thanks
WTF99 :-
Writers write, readers read and readers comment (just as you have). If the writer chooses to be influenced by the comments, so be it. It's an open forum. Always good to hear what other readers think.
The writer here is doing an excellent job, no doubt. I am just taking a forward view. And there is nothing wrong in being excited by a story. It means the writer is doing a great job.
From my point of view, a bored housewife loves her husband but for a variety of reasons isn't getting sexual satisfaction and so starts the adventures, many of which will be interesting but sooner or later the story loses steam due to repetition and lack of credibility (but I acknowledge that there are many stories where repetition drives the readership) . In that sense, Kamna is like a bored housewife and if she keeps on having other men without addressing the obvious issue with her husband, it gets boring. But others may still find it interesting. Each to his own.
The husband/wife interaction in this story can definitely be made interesting. Just look at the current village scenario....the mother in law, Kamna is jealous of her sister, Kamna desperately wants her husband (love +lust), then we have the uncle and his daughter in law and more to come I'm sure. The emphasis recently has been on Vinod. Imagine, Kamna sees him enjoying with these other young women....and Vinod seeing Kamna basically in a state of undress in front of other men, like that uncle, and then seeing her being fucked by them. Then there is the mother in law....Jealousy goes both ways. Later, back in the city, with the younger sister around.....lots of potential for husband/wife based adventures. But, as you said, it is up to the writer where he takes the story.
You may want to check, but in the recent updates, I got the strong impression that Kamna does not love the attention of other men as you mention. The writer even mentions how she might let her pallu slip in the market but not be aware of the impact on other men (or something very similar). It is her desperation to fulfill her sexual desires, unmet by her husband, that drives her to some men, and hence become slutty.
As for boring stuff, are you kidding?? There is so much here...and look at our lively discussion!! Definitely no assholes here.
Originally Posted by WTF99 View Post
Bro trust me when I say this that I really don't want to be an asshole here but you need to calm down and let Ajaniv write the way he wants to. Seems to me you want a boring cliched husband wife sex story but clearly this isn't that. Kamna is slutty!! Pure and simple but she also loves her husband and that m is the only thing that's keeping her from becoming a complete bitch. She wants her husband but also loves the attention of other men. If the writer made then hook up so fast then what's the point after that. Kamna gets her husband back and she stops messing around and end of story. There are no more adventures. So if you want those boring kind of romance stories there are plenty of those out there. And your concerns about this story turning into regular bored house wife story is baseless. Ajaniv is focusing so much on character development so that it doesn't become that. I don't know if you're over enthusiastic or simply like boring stuff but please try to understand the characters and something about the progression of this story before just demanding stuff. Thanks
WTF99 :-
Writers write, readers read and readers comment (just as you have). If the writer chooses to be influenced by the comments, so be it. It's an open forum. Always good to hear what other readers think.
The writer here is doing an excellent job, no doubt. I am just taking a forward view. And there is nothing wrong in being excited by a story. It means the writer is doing a great job.
From my point of view, a bored housewife loves her husband but for a variety of reasons isn't getting sexual satisfaction and so starts the adventures, many of which will be interesting but sooner or later the story loses steam due to repetition and lack of credibility (but I acknowledge that there are many stories where repetition drives the readership) . In that sense, Kamna is like a bored housewife and if she keeps on having other men without addressing the obvious issue with her husband, it gets boring. But others may still find it interesting. Each to his own.
The husband/wife interaction in this story can definitely be made interesting. Just look at the current village scenario....the mother in law, Kamna is jealous of her sister, Kamna desperately wants her husband (love +lust), then we have the uncle and his daughter in law and more to come I'm sure. The emphasis recently has been on Vinod. Imagine, Kamna sees him enjoying with these other young women....and Vinod seeing Kamna basically in a state of undress in front of other men, like that uncle, and then seeing her being fucked by them. Then there is the mother in law....Jealousy goes both ways. Later, back in the city, with the younger sister around.....lots of potential for husband/wife based adventures. But, as you said, it is up to the writer where he takes the story.
You may want to check, but in the recent updates, I got the strong impression that Kamna does not love the attention of other men as you mention. The writer even mentions how she might let her pallu slip in the market but not be aware of the impact on other men (or something very similar). It is her desperation to fulfill her sexual desires, unmet by her husband, that drives her to some men, and hence become slutty.
As for boring stuff, are you kidding?? There is so much here...and look at our lively discussion!! Definitely no assholes here.
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