06-05-2019, 12:00 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-05-2019, 02:09 PM by Logan555. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(06-05-2019, 09:31 AM)BHAVY.S_King Wrote: LOGAN 555 Your Story is Good. But Bhai Tu Ek New Story Start kar Jisme Amir - Garib , Uper Cast - Lower Cast , Crime , City - Village , Haveli , Malik - Joker , Shadyantra, Different Religion ke Log aapas m Sex Kare aur Story m ye Sab ho aur Story m sex Percentage 40% and Story Percentage 60% ho. Please Bhai is Prakar se Story Likh. Aise Story ki Bahut Demand h. Yaar aise Story Best h.
Bha4i pehle is story ko complete karunga phir koi doosri storybke bare me sochunga ek story likhne me hi kafi time lagta hai do story ek sath chalana possible nahi. Aur waise bhi us tarah ki kai stoey already xossip par chal rahi thi yaha bhi chalu ho gaj hai so i want to give something new and ab tak mujhe kafi achha response mila hai.
Aur waise is story me aapko wo sab ek sath mil jaega jo aap alag alag story me dhoond rahe hai. Yaha Amir gareeb ka bhi mode hai neha ke charectar me, Bheema jamadar upper cast lower cast ko represnt karta hai, Lalu and company me Crime and shadyantra ka flever hai, shabana ki kahani me differ religion ka flow hai, garima hariya ki kahani me malik naukar ka tadka hai. And is story me sex ke sath story bhi hai jo iske alawa bhi bahut kuch hai yaha jaise abhay raichand ki story vineeta ki sexy pooja aghori ki story and neha bdsm flavor. So yaha apko sab mil raha hai.
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