05-05-2019, 01:37 PM
Maverick1987, Xossipyenjoy,
Appreciate your involvement in the story. I was unaware there was a similar thread under the English story section of the old xossip. It's better in a sense that I would not be influenced by that story in any way. In this story this is just the beginning of a torrid affair between Bavani and Vikram. The way I want to portray Bavani is that she wanted the thrill of a short (maybe even a one time sex) affair but eventually succumbs to Vikram's continuous efforts in prolonging her sexual dalliance. This would be followed by the resultant bouts of guilt. Her husband is not of such weak character that he would accept his wife betraying him in any sense. At the same time he is conscious of not 'losing face' and the effect it would have on his reputation if the family breaks up because of his wife's affair. How he copes and what decision he makes would be the climax of the story. I have a vague idea on that but have yet to fully flesh out how I want to go about it.
I am midway through the next update which would have the first full adulterous coupling of Vikram and Bavani.
Appreciate your involvement in the story. I was unaware there was a similar thread under the English story section of the old xossip. It's better in a sense that I would not be influenced by that story in any way. In this story this is just the beginning of a torrid affair between Bavani and Vikram. The way I want to portray Bavani is that she wanted the thrill of a short (maybe even a one time sex) affair but eventually succumbs to Vikram's continuous efforts in prolonging her sexual dalliance. This would be followed by the resultant bouts of guilt. Her husband is not of such weak character that he would accept his wife betraying him in any sense. At the same time he is conscious of not 'losing face' and the effect it would have on his reputation if the family breaks up because of his wife's affair. How he copes and what decision he makes would be the climax of the story. I have a vague idea on that but have yet to fully flesh out how I want to go about it.
I am midway through the next update which would have the first full adulterous coupling of Vikram and Bavani.