04-05-2019, 11:26 AM
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Originally Posted by akarsh1970 View Post
Agreed. This is just disgusting now.
Wife will fuck Yogendra and then, when and if she gets free and if she feels like it, husband will get to fuck her used body. Husband now has second place in the relationship; Yogendra is the wife's lover and husband has to wait for him to be done with the wife. The wife will not even tell the husband what all she did with Yogendra. So, even if the husband were to get some pleasure from seeing his wife with others, he will not even have that pleasure. So, why should the husband agree to this?
Further, the wife says husband is not allowed to be jealous. So, she does have strong feelings for Yogendra and is willing to make the husband only a slave and nothing more and humiliate him and husband cannot expect any love or affection from wife. So, why should the husband continue in this relationship?
Husband is also not allowed to fuck Ganga - so the wife is completely controlling the husband and making him her slave. The husband will get no pleasure; in his own home, he will be secondary to Yogendra and he will just have to wait all alone till the time Yogendra is done with his wife every night.
When the author gave the wife's POV, he said that the wife loved the husband and wanted that relationship to continue. The first update after this talked about the couple having fun in Thailand, Goa, etc. So, this was shaping up to be a good swinging couple story with lots of different scenes possible.
But now, the author has contradicted all that he said in the wife's POV. The wife has schemed to bring Yogendra into the house and won't even tell the husband how long she has been planning this. Yogendra gropes and plays with the wife's body in the husband's house and wife does not even tell the husband about it on the first day. Next day, she comes to the husband, takes his dick, gives him a hand job, and asks him to allow her to make Yogendra her primary lover and master. So, with the hand job ongoing, the husband cannot even say no. The wife is completely manipulating the husband and relegating him to second place.
There is no pleasure for the husband in this. The wife has no love for him. This is just another cuckold and humiliation story. I think I will leave this story now. I have no interest in humiliation of any character.
foogy-
it is the author's story - (s)he can write how (s)he wants to,
you can critique the writing - the style, the details etc, but to complain about the theme - that is not your call.. if it doesnt suit your taste, dont read it, read something else.
we all am sure dont find half of things on here not according to our taste or liking (in terms of theme), so please dont complain about theme and genre.
Originally Posted by akarsh1970 View Post
Agreed. This is just disgusting now.
Wife will fuck Yogendra and then, when and if she gets free and if she feels like it, husband will get to fuck her used body. Husband now has second place in the relationship; Yogendra is the wife's lover and husband has to wait for him to be done with the wife. The wife will not even tell the husband what all she did with Yogendra. So, even if the husband were to get some pleasure from seeing his wife with others, he will not even have that pleasure. So, why should the husband agree to this?
Further, the wife says husband is not allowed to be jealous. So, she does have strong feelings for Yogendra and is willing to make the husband only a slave and nothing more and humiliate him and husband cannot expect any love or affection from wife. So, why should the husband continue in this relationship?
Husband is also not allowed to fuck Ganga - so the wife is completely controlling the husband and making him her slave. The husband will get no pleasure; in his own home, he will be secondary to Yogendra and he will just have to wait all alone till the time Yogendra is done with his wife every night.
When the author gave the wife's POV, he said that the wife loved the husband and wanted that relationship to continue. The first update after this talked about the couple having fun in Thailand, Goa, etc. So, this was shaping up to be a good swinging couple story with lots of different scenes possible.
But now, the author has contradicted all that he said in the wife's POV. The wife has schemed to bring Yogendra into the house and won't even tell the husband how long she has been planning this. Yogendra gropes and plays with the wife's body in the husband's house and wife does not even tell the husband about it on the first day. Next day, she comes to the husband, takes his dick, gives him a hand job, and asks him to allow her to make Yogendra her primary lover and master. So, with the hand job ongoing, the husband cannot even say no. The wife is completely manipulating the husband and relegating him to second place.
There is no pleasure for the husband in this. The wife has no love for him. This is just another cuckold and humiliation story. I think I will leave this story now. I have no interest in humiliation of any character.
foogy-
it is the author's story - (s)he can write how (s)he wants to,
you can critique the writing - the style, the details etc, but to complain about the theme - that is not your call.. if it doesnt suit your taste, dont read it, read something else.
we all am sure dont find half of things on here not according to our taste or liking (in terms of theme), so please dont complain about theme and genre.
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