03-05-2019, 12:58 PM
WTF99 -
Holy shit bro!!! Such a fast update. That's so cool. As for bang and shit, I really liked the way you changed the direction of the story. bang is a great turnoff for me unless the story needed it.This one doesn't need something like that right now. I also like how you are developing the character of Kamna. Its very realistic and well written. If you keep updating this fast and continue this way this story might become the most legendary story of all times. Cheers man!!!
Holy shit bro!!! Such a fast update. That's so cool. As for bang and shit, I really liked the way you changed the direction of the story. bang is a great turnoff for me unless the story needed it.This one doesn't need something like that right now. I also like how you are developing the character of Kamna. Its very realistic and well written. If you keep updating this fast and continue this way this story might become the most legendary story of all times. Cheers man!!!
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