03-05-2019, 12:53 PM
(03-05-2019, 12:38 PM)Jyoti Singh Wrote: Mujhe lesa lga ki tum kuch hadbadi me ho or story ki liye jaldi kr rhi ho,, esliye kha mene ki thoda settle hone do khud me settle ho jao... fir story ke flow ko samjho... aaram se thoda lanba or detailed situation likho (means kon kya soch rha h... uske aas pas kya chal rha h...kon kha betha h .. kya kr rah h... taki readers vo sam imagine kr sake). baki khud likhte likhte sikh jao.Ji bilkul dhyan dungi main aapke suggestion pe kyunki ye story abhi lambi ye abhi to apne actual track pe nahi aai hai.. Ye to bas base ban raha hai aage ki kahani ka... Kyunki isme ek major twist hai aage jo na suna hoga na kaha hoga kisi ne...
