03-05-2019, 12:38 PM
(03-05-2019, 12:32 PM)Avni26 Wrote: Thanks Jyoti, I appreciate your suggestion.. As I am new and trying to write my first story so your suggestion will be helpful for me....
Aur please ye bhi bataye ki story line kaisi hai...
Mujhe lesa lga ki tum kuch hadbadi me ho or story ki liye jaldi kr rhi ho,, esliye kha mene ki thoda settle hone do khud me settle ho jao... fir story ke flow ko samjho... aaram se thoda lanba or detailed situation likho (means kon kya soch rha h... uske aas pas kya chal rha h...kon kha betha h .. kya kr rah h... taki readers vo sam imagine kr sake). baki khud likhte likhte sikh jao.