03-05-2019, 12:32 PM
askk2me-
great going
Keep it up. This is turning out to be one of the best erotica I ever came across be it on this forum or any other forum. The kinkiness of the situations and sex narration is awesome. The subji mandi scene or the blowbang scene or the scene with 3 road workers they are all very erotic and the sabji mandi scene is unique too. Put more of such scenes in story dude. The husband angle has now added something to story element too. Story + sex narration + avoiding repetition(applicble only to longer multipart erotica) are very important elements of erotica. So far your writing has nailed pretty much everything. Don't mind people not commenting , there are a lot of people like me who until now haven't commented or probably won't but still love this story, there are only very few stories I commented on and that too,when writer wasn't sure of continuing or discouraged by negative comments, and I badly wanted the story to continue. So I gave up on my laziness and keyed in my username password to login to let you know this is awesome erorica and you should continue.
great going
Keep it up. This is turning out to be one of the best erotica I ever came across be it on this forum or any other forum. The kinkiness of the situations and sex narration is awesome. The subji mandi scene or the blowbang scene or the scene with 3 road workers they are all very erotic and the sabji mandi scene is unique too. Put more of such scenes in story dude. The husband angle has now added something to story element too. Story + sex narration + avoiding repetition(applicble only to longer multipart erotica) are very important elements of erotica. So far your writing has nailed pretty much everything. Don't mind people not commenting , there are a lot of people like me who until now haven't commented or probably won't but still love this story, there are only very few stories I commented on and that too,when writer wasn't sure of continuing or discouraged by negative comments, and I badly wanted the story to continue. So I gave up on my laziness and keyed in my username password to login to let you know this is awesome erorica and you should continue.
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