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[Avni26]

Very small suggestion for, you may or may not be like it but the thing is that you should be try to write long sentences and long update that reader can start to settle down to story and understand the flow of your story. Just a small advice that please don't break your story to 4-5 lines and post, make it a enough big piece and post it. This will help you more to connect with readers. (this is optional because the story is not even started so ---- create a good flow of your story and elaborate the circumstances/situation which will help you more)

Thanks Jyoti, I appreciate your suggestion.. As I am new and trying to write my first story so your suggestion will be helpful for me.... 
Aur please ye bhi bataye ki story line kaisi hai...