Adultery A Wife's Journey Continues by abcxyz13
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Originally Posted by krish agarwal View Post
nice...does not need to make him cuck

akarsh1970 -

Agree completely with you Krish!

No point in humiliating the husband. Abcxyz13, You started off well with the couple not getting along and their sex life going downhill, wife on the phone constantly, presumably with her old flame/master.

Let the marriage break, let there be a divorce. Wife can then freely have sex with as many people as you want. Why humiliate the husband unnecessarily?

If this is a story or part where the only purpose is Swetha freely having sex with multiple people then the only role of the husband will be to be cheated on repeatedly and being humiliated. His character has no other role in the story - as in the party scene. Wife fools him with a kiss, then humiliates him in front of all his friends, now all his friends will see the wife as a potential slut, hit on her, bed her, etc. Poor husband only gets humiliated and cheated on publicly. Can he realistically face these friends again?

Too much of humiliation of any character will put off some readers at least, myself included. And, it does not make the story any more interesting even for other readers, it is just a distraction at best for other readers too. Which is why in the first part, readers were asking for justice, etc for the husband and for the couple to get back together and so on.

So, completely agree with Krish here. Let the marriage break, wife can then meet many people, may be become a full time prostitute even in order to earn money (or get some other job and have sex with colleagues and seniors and clients, etc) and get into all sorts of sex scenes. But do not keep one character purely for humiliation. No reader enjoys humiliation of any character.
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RE: A Wife's Journey Continues by abcxyz13 - by Ramesh_Rocky - 03-05-2019, 12:14 PM



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