08-12-2021, 04:02 AM
But one suggestion,till now you have shown that Shruti started off innocent but is slowly unraveling to discover and explore her sexuality more and more.
This latest turn of talking about a past incident does not connect with her initial characterization.
While the entire Rohan angle is quite good, I would rather have it as some lady friend of Shruti. Like that woman friend of hers whose house she went by Auto. Generally,women talk about all their naughty stuff more openly with other women.
This latest turn of talking about a past incident does not connect with her initial characterization.
While the entire Rohan angle is quite good, I would rather have it as some lady friend of Shruti. Like that woman friend of hers whose house she went by Auto. Generally,women talk about all their naughty stuff more openly with other women.