02-12-2021, 05:35 PM
Such an interesting start. Totally agree that pages long sex narrations is boring. Waiting for the build-up. Keep writing. All the best :)
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Bitches are not born, they are made in bed.
~Niyati. Seeker of well-written erotica.
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