01-12-2021, 02:02 PM
(12-04-2020, 06:18 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Ha bhai update slow he I know...mafi chahta hu
But mujhe nahi lakta ki kahani dhire chal rahi he
Because ye kahani reality + imagination pe based he
But isme reality dalne ki me 100% koshish kar Raha hu
Q ki mujhe nahi lagta ki koi House wife ya fir girl lower class logo se sirf hawas aur sexual contact ke liye thoda touch karne pe man jati hogi ....
Uske liye boht sara seduction aur planning karna padta he aur specially old aur ugly buddhe ka toh chance he nahi Banta par isme imagination ka bhi part ata he toh kahani me possible he ...........
So I think khani aur dhimi chalegi...
But update jaldi dene ki puri koshish karunga ......
Thanks for suggetion bro ....
Keep supporting
Bohot acchi tarah se likhte hain aap ..dhimi chale isi mein thoda real feel aati hai aur aapki kahani ko is type ki aur kahaniyon se alag karti hai, jinme seedhe seedhe chudai pe aa jate hain jo ki real mein nhi hota aur usme kuch maja bhi nhi aata.