28-11-2021, 07:41 PM
(28-11-2021, 04:49 PM)Yampag Wrote: Take Care Lody bhai.. App badhiya likh rahe ho.. I don't know what is your plan for later development.. but ek character ne to entry maar lii aur kaam pe lag gaya..
Jab tino aurato ki baat aayi.. to mai soch raha tha ki tino me se Thakur ke patni ka number pahela lagna chahiya.. aur abhi ki update me isne lund to dekh hi liya, touch bhi kar liya..aur soongh bhi liya.. mere hisab se yeh thoda fast aage badh gaya.. abhi aur thodi kashmkash aur zizak aur tadap jyada dikha ke fir touch wala late to thoda aur mazaa aataa.. but yeh meri koi tikaa nahi hai.. aap badhiya jaa rahe ho.. aaraama karke vapis update dena.. dekhate hai itne hi character rahenge ya aur badhenge.. dekhate hai.. but blackmail yaa jyada abusing mat banaa denaa.. but it's your story.. do whatever you like.. thanks..
Sorry bhai story thodi fast ho gayi...story ko mai slow rakhna chahta tha lekin kai readers ko ye pasand nahi hai....jyadatar readers sex ke intejar me rahte hai....lekin ab se mai is baat ka dhyan rakhuga aur story ko aaram se aage badauga...
Thank You So Much....
Aap sab agle update ka intezar kar rahe hoge par iske liye mai maafi chahta hu , abhi tabiyat sahi nahi hai isliye thoda time lag sakta hai....phir bhi mai kosis karuga ek chhota update dene ke liye..