28-11-2021, 03:37 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-11-2021, 03:40 PM by Yampag. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Yes, indeed.. unfortunate..that the writer is not responding.. though his maiden attempt is very promising and atleast I have expected that.. after this story he will try another one also.. coz he has shown such metal.. but due to some irresponsible readers he put this story in shelves.. My only request him to forgive them and again try to focus on this story.. if you feel after reading some comments that where you can improve...than try for the implementation and neglect the rubbish comments and move ahead.. you will definitely improve in your next story.. but don't pay attention to bullshits.. it's your story and you are free to write as per your ideas..concepts.. it is indeed difficult to write an erotic story.. and I am saluting each n every writes here for your hard endeavour to entertain the readers.. I also like few stories which suits my taste.. but that does not mean that I write rubbish comments for them.. if I don't like.. I simply take an exit from that story.. but kudos to all writers of this forum... thank you..