30-04-2019, 09:52 PM
Excellent story dude!! Love it. But there is just one thing I dont like about your story which is that Tanvi is having sexual incidents with too way many men at the same time which feels very unrealistic because almost all women like to focus on just one man at a time. So in my opinion Khurramji should be the main point of focus for now and then later move to other men. Anyway its a great story dude, please continue.