25-11-2021, 09:22 PM
(25-11-2021, 09:17 PM)Bindass08 Wrote: Dost idea to aapka accha hai....par jitne jyada characters hote hai utna jyada badi story ho jaati hai...aur fir un sab characters ko equal rakhna is tough job for a new writer like me......but thanks for your idea...
Dimag mein ek plot aaya hai....issi story ko aage badhane k....jisme komal (Mausa ji's Daughter) bhi lead main rahegi....lets c....
Koi baat nhi bhai ....dekho bhai story long ho or mazedar ho to review aaram se milte hai or apki writing skills bhi osm hai ...chlo koi baat nhi wo nhi to yhi Shi....
Isme aage kya hota hai...
To bhai new update kab de rhe ho...ya new thread open kroge...?agr aaj se de do to sone pr suhaga ho jayega ...