30-04-2019, 02:28 PM
khemucha-
Very well written as usual. Seems like something is brewing up this afternoon.
I was wondering if the protagonist is going to become a bit of a rascal and pursure the women a bit mote proactively. Till now, as you have yourself said, he has welcomed what fate brought for him. I think the reason I enjoyed the Sakshi encounter more was that he made most of the opportunity and enticed her from her husband bed. The active conniving chase is as exciting as the consumation "tandav". So think about it. At the same time its your story - so carry on as you want. But very well written.
Very well written as usual. Seems like something is brewing up this afternoon.
I was wondering if the protagonist is going to become a bit of a rascal and pursure the women a bit mote proactively. Till now, as you have yourself said, he has welcomed what fate brought for him. I think the reason I enjoyed the Sakshi encounter more was that he made most of the opportunity and enticed her from her husband bed. The active conniving chase is as exciting as the consumation "tandav". So think about it. At the same time its your story - so carry on as you want. But very well written.
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