30-04-2019, 02:17 PM
bicky1996-
I started reading this thread yesterday and read all the updates at one go....It's fantastic man...There's everything in it seduction, lust..... You've got amazing writing skills....
I've one suggestion for you, please don't make it a cuckold story....whatever Kamna does should happen behind Vinod's back or under his nose but not be aware of it...don't rule out completely Vinod and his daughter...their involvement would make look like a real life incident....
And introduce one or two teenage male characters (18 or 19 years old).....
All the best
I started reading this thread yesterday and read all the updates at one go....It's fantastic man...There's everything in it seduction, lust..... You've got amazing writing skills....
I've one suggestion for you, please don't make it a cuckold story....whatever Kamna does should happen behind Vinod's back or under his nose but not be aware of it...don't rule out completely Vinod and his daughter...their involvement would make look like a real life incident....
And introduce one or two teenage male characters (18 or 19 years old).....
All the best
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