Adultery Seduction of Isha, the happy house wife by elder_guy
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elder_guy-

Hello readers,

Do you find anything different in the latest update in the way it is written?

I have tried to give more description too and for a change in this part, it is the lady seducing the man.

Honestly there is some copy & paste job (from my own story) as I tried to take from yet another story in the pipeline and adopted it to this story, has anyone noticed it and if so do you think it is adopted well.

Is there any improvement in writing skills compared to when the story starte in d?

Your feedback will help in making the story more interesting and of course hot.
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RE: Seduction of Isha, the happy house wife by elder_guy - by Ramesh_Rocky - 30-04-2019, 02:12 PM



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