20-11-2021, 10:55 AM
(19-11-2021, 09:51 PM)The_one Wrote: This story is running well.
There is manu shades and supporting characters here. That's good for a novel.
As I said Earlier your are Best among others writers
Kuch carecter jo miss kar raha tha shuru mai likh kar aur socha maine sex ke sath novel touch de pao to Accha hai....
Isse ye bhi pata chalega ki reder sex padna pasand karte hai ya sex ke sath novel type story iski karna maine yaha kuch story ko alag disha mai badtaya....