19-11-2021, 10:18 AM
(16-11-2021, 05:47 PM)Yampag Wrote: We can see what you are narrating story as an erotic writer.. very interesting and waiting for more characters to enter.. built up very good suspence and than come the main heroine I suppose.. and what a masterly described in details about the past.. it shows that it will be one of the masterpiece here..
Mere alawa aap sabhi readers hi story ko masterpiece bana sakte hai...isliye aap sabhi se request hai ki kahani ke saath jude rahiye aur aise hi comment karke batate rahiye ki kahani kaisi chal rahi hai....agar kuch kami lag rahi ho to mujhe bata dena jisse mai aur behtar kar sakoo
Thank You.


