28-04-2019, 07:35 PM
breville1-
Superb! Turning out to be an erotic masterpiece!! The way its playing out, who needs violence??!! Very well written. The seduction is "rock hard"!!
And what I particularly like is that despite her "acquired sluttiness", she really wants her husband's love but the fool can't see through his mental block about her being fat. She's put on weight (pregnancy) and that's all he can see, day after day. Being close to her, he can't see any weight loss or beauty ....can't see the wood for the trees as they say!! Real idiot.
I hope you can continue this theme throughout your story and ultimately let her achieve her goal!! Men are so stupid sometimes, ignoring the jewel that they already have for trinkets in the market!!
Definitely worth waiting for your updates.
Superb! Turning out to be an erotic masterpiece!! The way its playing out, who needs violence??!! Very well written. The seduction is "rock hard"!!
And what I particularly like is that despite her "acquired sluttiness", she really wants her husband's love but the fool can't see through his mental block about her being fat. She's put on weight (pregnancy) and that's all he can see, day after day. Being close to her, he can't see any weight loss or beauty ....can't see the wood for the trees as they say!! Real idiot.
I hope you can continue this theme throughout your story and ultimately let her achieve her goal!! Men are so stupid sometimes, ignoring the jewel that they already have for trinkets in the market!!
Definitely worth waiting for your updates.
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