16-11-2021, 01:43 PM
(16-11-2021, 01:15 PM)Sahil Siraj Wrote:Bhai pahle to apka Dhanyawad par ehaa '. ka maine start to kara tha kintu ek ko khush kane ke liye sab ko dukhi nahi kar skata ha maine aise kattar type story interfaith lovers par starr kari par waha maza na aaya.... Maine isse pahle ek kahani mai ya kahe isi story mai Parveen ke sath aise conditions banayi par mere fan mere reder hert hone lage to maine story change kar di....What a great Writer Mr. Lion King is. Totally Amazing way of writing.
Mein personally yahan sirf lion bhai ki stories ko padhne aata hoon but unfortunately mein silent reader hoon Lion Bhai ki stories ka lekin jis hisab se lion bhai likhte hien aaj mera man hua k mien lion bhai ki openly praise karoon mujhe lion bhai ki koi story buri nahi lagti mein har tarha ki condition mien hamesha lion Bhai k sath hoon but plz meri aik request he k is story mien thora '. touch zyada kia jaae Mahzabeen ko zyada '. pretend kia jaae or usko paratna k doran (Namz) k doran ka koi scean create kia jaae lekin kuch mohtat andaz k sath ta k kisi ko bura bhi na lage or agar plz lion bhai meri is request ko zaroor poora karein or acha to ye ho jab us scene mein gangbang type ka tarka lage
Your Big fan
Ab is foam mai interfaith ka colam nahi hai.... Isi karan mai likh na paya na sonkashi ke sath bhi likh paya.....
Abhi ye story aise situation mai dal raha ho jaha se mahzbeen Phir se back tera mai aaye.... Aur ek carecter jo sabeen ka hai maine iske bare mai nahi socha use mai isi next update mai end karne wala ho jisse mahzbeen Phir se apne immoton mai aaye..... Aur Phir new start apne life mai kare....
Ye updte mai kuch soch kar hi likhne wala ho