Adultery திருக்குறள் - எல்லா புகழும் வள்ளுவனுக்கே
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Congratulations on the new venture. My compliments for trying to tell the story of lust from a different angle. kavia is heartbroken that she will leave her husband for her knowing that her sister will die soon.The conversations that take place between Ananya Raj are excellent. After that, Kavia joins them for a threesum. The story moves better.

There are still some spelling mistakes. Next you use Tamil words instead of English words that come in between, the story will be sweeter to read
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RE: கொஞ்சம் சதை மிச்சம் கதை - by VELAVAN - 10-11-2021, 07:15 PM



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