27-04-2019, 12:30 PM
(27-04-2019, 12:22 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Great update,but I don't like the story to be focused on two women.Erotic stories are better when it is centred around one female character with occasionally a few females acting as support in a few updates.Just like Ik Ajab Si Pyaas it would have been better if it was centred around Aleena.
Anyway you know what you plan to do better than any of us.You must be having something in your mind.Keep writing.
Thanks.
its true..ik ajib si pyas was epic story centered on one women