26-04-2019, 07:23 PM
shector87-
You are going too fast again... It's too early to get Anand attention, out side vacation. What you narrate for rest of the plot? Narrate her expressions and how Aditya taking her to his control by his advances in private. Don't involve Aanand.
It's just a suggestion, please don't take me wrong. I don't want to kill your spirit.
You are doing great in bringing the dead story alive with regular updates.
You are going too fast again... It's too early to get Anand attention, out side vacation. What you narrate for rest of the plot? Narrate her expressions and how Aditya taking her to his control by his advances in private. Don't involve Aanand.
It's just a suggestion, please don't take me wrong. I don't want to kill your spirit.
You are doing great in bringing the dead story alive with regular updates.
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