Misc. Erotica CHAHAT

[Lion King 989]

You  are one of the best Erotica Writer. You know how to start a good story and keeping good pace. But you always lost motivation in the middle.
Every story you write has great potential to be best and better Than your Nazbeen Story.  Don't  compete with your creation.

Also there are several  things you need to overcame such as beggars and few character. You want to write novel so you have to introduce multiple angle and plot. And they need to different from one to another. Make situation, give them  motive to be adulteress. Here your heroine was innocent after so many pressure but you missed main point by exposing blackmailer  

No offence..  As a true  fan of yours I just express my things.  

And regrading  total mahzabi or sanskari things -those are bad for good story...  Others sites who allows those Don't  have readers and most of the stories are garbage there..


You are best and will remain best...

Sabse pahle apka Dhanyawad... Par mai max middle class use karta ho isliye ki ek ameer lady ke sath middle lower class ka sex alag romach paisa karta hai.... But ye story abhi shuru kari hai mai ise nazbeen ke sath stand to nahi kar sakta kintu kafi kuch socha hai maine is story mai mai mahzbeen ko sex machine nahi banaa chahata.... Kintu abhi mahzbaeen kiya chahati hai woh use ab bhi nai pata chala.... Thoda kuch update ka wait kare story dheeme dheeme clear karonga