Misc. Erotica CHAHAT

[The_one]

You are one of the best Erotica Writer. You know how to start a good story and keeping good pace. But you always lost motivation in the middle.
Every story you write has great potential to be best and better Than your Nazbeen Story. Don't compete with your creation.

Also there are several things you need to overcame such as beggars and few character. You want to write novel so you have to introduce multiple angle and plot. And they need to different from one to another. Make situation, give them motive to be adulteress. Here your heroine was innocent after so many pressure but you missed main point by exposing blackmailer

No offence.. As a true fan of yours I just express my things.

And regrading total mahzabi or sanskari things -those are bad for good story... Others sites who allows those Don't have readers and most of the stories are garbage there..


You are best and will remain best...