Adultery A Sexy Lactating Housewife And Some Ugly Low Class Men

[Prince Babul]

You'll get a lot better comments dude. But remember you only wrote one update. Look at the number of comments you got bro! You'll get even more. You'll get more of a loyal following if you consistently update. Like me for example. Almost 99% of the stories here bore me. Cyz they're the same boring vanilla adultry of wife cheating with colleagues or husbands friend or some other braindead plot, or straight up incest which is another unoriginal genre. There are some other stories which try to be like the one you're writing but straight up copy interracial porn stories and videos by having this little white wife getting fucked by some big brute guy whose physical stats should've landed him in some science laboratory, or circus than rather a driver or malee for some rich couple.

The characters, plot specially the emphasis on erotic breastfeeding to low class old ugly men is simple but very kinky. You don't have to write like Shakespeare and pretend you're gonna win the next nobel prize in literature by writing stories that people just wanna read to jerk off and relax. Your tone is perfect for a kinky sex erotica. Just keep updating consistently and me and many like me will religiously follow your story and comment, like your updates. I'll specially write you some great kinky comments because I've had some personal experience with this kind of situation which is why i Only look for stories like this. So give another great, long update bro. We're waiting and can't wait to see how many old ugly people quench their hunger from Deepa's delicious breastmilk.

Also, have the dialogue be in Hinglish rather English. It'll sound more natural and kinky. And you can prolong an update by simply giving more explicit details about the breastfeeding scenes. Like when birju was squeezing one breast and drinking from another Deeps arched her back,  backwards and let her head fall backwards as well, closing her eyes, breathing loudly she felt as if this old man would suckle the life out of her. Give mire details as to how she feels when this toothless old guy sucks on her nipples,  vigorously clawing and drinking from her breasts. Or how he's squeezing her breasts and give more details like how he's holding them in his palms, trying the feels the heavy weight of her soft breasts. The softness coupled with the weird heaviness of her milk filled tits made him even more erect and hungry etc. That way you don't need to constantly move the plot forward because the details are gonna increase the size of the updates enough to satiate the readers.

Please continue the story

Excellent story plz continue

Thank you