19-10-2021, 06:14 PM
Also, have the dialogue be in Hinglish rather English. It'll sound more natural and kinky. And you can prolong an update by simply giving more explicit details about the breastfeeding scenes. Like when birju was squeezing one breast and drinking from another Deeps arched her back, backwards and let her head fall backwards as well, closing her eyes, breathing loudly she felt as if this old man would suckle the life out of her. Give mire details as to how she feels when this toothless old guy sucks on her nipples, vigorously clawing and drinking from her breasts. Or how he's squeezing her breasts and give more details like how he's holding them in his palms, trying the feels the heavy weight of her soft breasts. The softness coupled with the weird heaviness of her milk filled tits made him even more erect and hungry etc. That way you don't need to constantly move the plot forward because the details are gonna increase the size of the updates enough to satiate the readers.