11-10-2021, 11:32 AM
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(11-10-2021, 02:19 AM)ak81ymail Wrote: Do post your reviews and suggestion and looking ahead for response
Cons:
1) Don't spam your own thread. Updates delivery should be timed better.
To many updates in same day will lead to next many days completely empty. If updates were 1 per day, then it wil be regular posting
2) Pictures were missing in later parts completely
3) Original Font was fine , the last few posts had to big a font
4) Expected more incidents while she was with Hubby in call
Pros:
1) Chat conversations were good
2) The way Shubha went into debauchery was more realistic (when compared to other stories)
3) Good writing Skills
Future:
1) More incidents with Hubby on call?
2) What will Hubby see/learn when he comes Back?
3) Shailesh Character scope ?
4) Any more incidents behind hubby's back when he is around?
General:
How are you going to take it forward? Any hints. Is story close to end or more of Shubha's ADVENTURES exist?
THREAD RATING: 4 STARS OUT OF 5