02-10-2021, 01:15 PM
Note.... Ab tak jitni maine kahani likhi sabse zyada ye flop kahani mai se ja rahi hai..... Bus 2 cmmt aaye aur view bhi kuch nahi bade..... Maine galat nirnay liya kahani shuru karne ka.....
Ok ab Phir mai ye kahani bina apne anjam mai pahuche band karna chaha raha ho.... Aisa pahli bar hua itna likhe par 2 hi cmmt aaye.... Woh bhi welcome ke aur ek thoda sa bada par.... Mujhe nirasha hue isliye mai kahani band kar raha ho..... Bahot mahant lagti hai kahani banane mai aur mera weekness point hai ki agar cmmt na aaye na View bade to kahani likhne mai mera intrest chala jata hai.......
Ye kafi long subject par sochi thi like nazbeen ki trah aur jab bhi ek hi updte likhta ho us par ek star mil jata hai yaha to kuch khas pasand nahi kari gayi ye kahani aur bewakoof ki trah likhne se fayda nahi
Ok ab Phir mai ye kahani bina apne anjam mai pahuche band karna chaha raha ho.... Aisa pahli bar hua itna likhe par 2 hi cmmt aaye.... Woh bhi welcome ke aur ek thoda sa bada par.... Mujhe nirasha hue isliye mai kahani band kar raha ho..... Bahot mahant lagti hai kahani banane mai aur mera weekness point hai ki agar cmmt na aaye na View bade to kahani likhne mai mera intrest chala jata hai.......
Ye kafi long subject par sochi thi like nazbeen ki trah aur jab bhi ek hi updte likhta ho us par ek star mil jata hai yaha to kuch khas pasand nahi kari gayi ye kahani aur bewakoof ki trah likhne se fayda nahi