[rehanboy16]

Wahhh kamal ka shandaar update diya hai. Har aek word kamukta se bharpoor. Maine bohat kahaniyan parhi hain jo bas aek bar parh kar interest  khatam ho jaata hai, lekin is story mein pata nahi kya jaadu hai ke har aek word ko 3-4 baar parhne ka dil karta hai. 

Das ka dominating nature aur Namrata ke dar mein chuppi hawas jis ka use aj ehsaas hua hai…..bulkul aek different feeling ayi. 

Das ka us ki naram mulayam gori aur bhari hui gand mein ungli pherna aur aisa karte hue Namrata ki aankhon mein dekh ke kamini smile dena……uffffff parh kya halat hui woh describe nahi kar sakta. 

Das ka Namrata ko deewar se chipka kar uski kamar aur gardan ko sehlana  aur Namrata ka apne harami sar se poochna ke “Sir Kya kar rahe ho” is mind blowing. Namrata, bhale hi bholi hai par usko bhi ehsaas hua aek pal ke liye k yeh Sir mere saath kya kar rahe hai. Aur Das ka uski baat ko ignore karke apni hawas ko anjam dena jis se Namrata kuch keh nahi paayi. These small descriptions makes you one the few rarest writers who cannot be matched. 

Phir Namrata ko samajh aana ke ab joh Das uske saath kar raha hai woh aese khule mein karna uske liye badnaami ban sakta hai aur phir Das ki baaton mein phas ke uske saath college k baad kahin akele jana jaha use pata hai k koi nahi aata…..aek bohat hi erotic moment tha. 

Aur bhi bohat points hain joh phir detail mein describe karoon ga. Abhi tak ke liye just hats off to you.  clp); clp); yr):  

Aise hi likhte rahiye. Keep updating. 

And please next update thoda jaldi dene ki koshish karna. Next update is going to be a blast. I can just feel it.  :( :(