25-09-2021, 11:32 AM
(18-09-2019, 08:55 PM)bhukhalund Wrote: MANU KE LIYE NAYA GHAR KE GRUH-PRAVESH KA DIN BAHUT LUCKY THA. SUBAH MEY KUNWARI LADKI SAPNA KO CHODA. RAAT MEY APNI EK AUE SPECIAL MAAL NARGIS KEE MAA KO CHODA HEE NAHI USSEY APNA DIWAANA BANAAYA. WONHA SE AAKAR SEEMA KO PHIR CHODA AUR DONO NANGE HEE DUSRE ROOM MEY AAYE.
Dono nange andar waale room mey aaye aur dekha kee dono ladkiya Sapna aur Ratna ( sister of Mansi’s driver Birju) bilkul nangi soee hai…
“ dekho bhaiya, tujhse chudwane dono randia taiyar hai….”
Manu ne dekha , Sapna thodi dubli patli thee lekin Ratna healthy thee Puna jaise lekin chuchi teeno mey sabse chhoti thee..muskil se 32 inch, 5’1” height, weight kareeb 50 kgs, gora rang, normal thigha aur choot par khub ghane baal...Sapna kee bhee choot jhaanto se bhari thee . Manu ne jhuk kar Seema kee chikni choot ko chuma…
“ teri choot sabse pyari hai..”
“ bhaiya, ye ladki tumse chudwane hee yanha aee hai...maza lo iss ladki kaa aur baad mey Sapna ko bhee chod lena, mai baahar jaati hu soney….”
Manu usse rokna chahta thaa lekin Seema bolte huye chali gaee,
“ mere saamne kissee ko bhee pyaar karoge to mujhe bahut jalan hogi..”
Door pull kar Seema baahar chali gaee. Manu ko Seema kee maasumiyat aur frankness bahut pasand aaee. Lekin saamne kachchee kali apni jawani chalkaye huye soo rahi thee. Ratna ko dekh kar hee laga kee ye dono ladkiya Sapna aur Ratna untouched hai..Sapna kaa rass to ek baar chus chuka thaa ab Ratna kee baari thee..,
Manu uss ladki ke bagal mey let gaya aur nange badan ko sahlane laga. Thoda hee sahlaane ke baad Ratna ne karwat badli aur Manu ke taraf face kar liya. Apna ek leg Manu ke body par chadha
diya.,.
Ladki koi dream dekh rahi thee, Manu uske facial expression ko change hotey huye dekhta raha, kabhi smile karti thee to kabhi serious ho jaati thee, nind mey uski body mey harquat bhee ho rahi thee..Manu ne bhee Ratna ko apni baanho mey samet liya thaa lekin bahut hee dheere se pakda thaa..ladki kee pyari see rasbhari thirakti lips ko dekh raha thaa. Ratna kaa haath semi limped lund par gaya...uski aankhe bund thee, saans dheemi dheemi chal rahi thee, gahri nind mey thee.
Eisa lagta hai kee ladkiya maa ke pet se hee shikh kar aati hai kee lund haath mey aaye to kya karna hai. Nind mey hee ladki kaa haath lund par upar neeche hone laga. Idhar Ratna kaa haath lund par gaya aur dusri taraf Manu kaa haath chikni kamsin jawani ke nange badan par thikadne laga . Hontho se start kar, shoulders, upper arms, phir chkni back ko sahlaate huye chuttaro par haath lagaya. Manu ke sahlaya aur phir chuttaro ko dabaya.
“uff kitni kadak aur chikni hai. “
Ek taraf chuttar par Manu ke haath kaa pressure badhta gaya, dusri taraf ladki kaa haath teji se lawda par phisalne laga. Lawda purey form mey thaa. Manu ne chuttaro ko masalte huye socha kee kya kare , ladki ko jagaye yaa bina jagaye choot mey lawda pel de. Ladki ko dekh kar Manu ko pura biswas thaa kee ye Ratna bhee Sapna kee tarah virgin hai. Manu ne decide kiya kee iss baar bina choot ko geela kiye pele, ladki ko dard to bahut karega lekin jindgi bhar ye Ratna apni pahli chudai nahi bhulegi….
Manu ne care lete huye kee ladki jagey nahi, utha. Usne Ratna ko flat kiya. Houle se kaee baar chuchio ko masla, sahlaya, thodi thodi der nipples ko chuma. Ratna ab bhee nind mey thee aur koi suhana sapna dekh rahi thee. Manu ne legs ko phailaya aur jaisa Sapna ke saath kiya thaa, choot ko kaee baar masla aur hontho ko chuma. Ratna ke body mey harquat to huee lekin usne aankh nahi kholi...kuchh palo ke liye ladki kaa breathing disturb huaa lekin phir normal ho gaya. Kachchee jawani kee nind thee, raat ke kareeb 2 buj rahe theye aur iss samay nind sabse ghahri hoti hai. Bagal mey Sapna bhee karwat liye huye besudh saa so rahi thee.
Last night Seema ke baad Phulwa phir Champa ko chodkar Manu ne apna gussa ( Altaaf aur Aayush ke liye ) utara thaa...uss raat bhee Tabbu ke baad Seema ko chod chuka thaa. Ye Ratna uss raat kee teesri choot thee...aur Manu jaanta thaa kee agar Sapna jug gaee to wo bhee bina chudwaye nahi chhoregi…
Manu lund ko choot par ragadne laga , todi ragad ke baad jhaant alag huye, choot kee slit dikhi aur Manu ne haule se clit ko masla…
“ ahhhhh”
Ratna ne bina aankh khole moan kiya. Uska legs aur jyada khul gaya...kuchh der aur tip ko slit par upar se neeche, neeche se upar ragda aur gulaabi maal, rasila maal dikhne laga. Manu ne ladki ke ek shoulder ko pakda, dusre haath se tip ko choot ke chhede par dabaya….
“ Poonam, tujhe kya huaa, mujhse pyar kyo nahi kiya aaj…”
Poonam kee yaad aaee, Manu ke muh se awaj nikli aur ek khub jordaar dhakka…..
“ maa , marrrrrrrr gaee…..baap re kya ghusa andar….”
Ratna jor se boli, uski aankhe khuli kee khuli rah gaee. Manu ne ussey aage nahi bolne diya, uske pyaare pyaare chhote, patle lips ko apne lips ke beech mey liya….aur lagaatar lund ko dabaate huye jor daar dhakka maarta raha.
Ratna kee cheekh sunn bagal mey soee Sapna jhut se uth gaee , baahar soee Seema ne bhee awaj sunee, wo muskuraaee aur phir aankh bund kar soo gaee…
“ Ratna bahan, le subah meri choot phati thee abhee teri choot phat gaee, pura musal andar ghus gaya...chinta mutt kar tu maregi nahi…”
Sapna ne Ratna ke gaalo sahlaate huye kaha. Pura lawda andar ghush chuka thaa, Manu ne lawda andar daba kar rakha thaa, gaalo aur chuchio ko haule haule sahlaate huye honto ko kaee baar chusa...chuma aur kaha,
“ Tum teeno, Seema, tum ( Ratna ) aur Sapna ko pahli baar kolkatta se aane ke baad dekha...phir tum teeno itni asaani se mujhse kaise putt gaee, kaise chudwane ke liye taiyaar ho gaee. “
Ratna ke face par dard saaf saaf jhalak raha thaa, uska body bhee kada ho gaya thaa. Manu janha bhee possible thaa, choot mey lawda dabaye huye ussey chum raha thaa.
Pahle Sapna ne apne, apne family ke baarey mey sabkuchh bataya. Yah bhee kee uska baap Shankar jo naye ghar kaa contractor thaa hamesha Champa aur Mansi kee baat karta thaa, baad mey Mamta didi kee mast jawani kee baat bhee karne laga...Usne yah bhee kaha kee uska baap bahut aurato se, apni bibi aur bahno se bhee dhandha karwata thaa, appni bahno ko to chodta thaa hee dono betio ko bhee chodna chahta thaa lekin chod nahi paya.
“ aur ek raat mere saamne 8-9 logo ne mere baabu jee ko bahut maara, maa, bua aur didi ko sabne khub choda , saara , rupya paisa lut liya..babuji dhanbaad ke hospital mey bharti hai...sabkuchh mere saamne huaa lekin kisee ne mujhe touch nahi kiya...Paper mey Mansi didi ke baarey mey bahut kuchh padha, mai khud unse milna chahti thee lekin didi ne khud mujhe bulwa liya...koi kuchh bhee kahe Mansi didi jaisee badhia aur koi ho hee nahi sakta…”
“ aur mai badhia nahi hu, badmas aadmi hu…”
Manu ne Sapna kee ek chuchi ko masalte huye puchha….
“ haa, tum sabse bade badmas jise dunia kee har ladki , har aurat apni baanho mey aur apni jaangho ke beech rakhna chahti hai…”
Sapna ne muskurate huye kaha. Manu ne pyar se uske gaalo par chapat lagate huye kaha,
“ dekh, aaj ke jamaane mey, baap beti, bhai bahan, maa beta yaa eise hee aur eise aur bhee relation mey bahut chudai hoti hai, khulkar chudai hoti hai...lekin kisee bhee tarah kee jabardasti yaa phir dhandha ke liye chudwana mujhe bilkul pasand hai...aur naa Mansi ko pasand hai…”
Manu ne dekha kee Ratna ke face kaa colour laut aaya hai, lips aur aankho mey smile aa gaee hai..choot ke andar bhee rasila pan aa gaya hai...Mamu ne dheere dheere chodna shuru kiya , dheere se dhakka marna shuru kiya…
“ aur Ratna, tera to iss gaaon se, mere ghar se koi relation nahi hai phir tu kyo mujhse chudwane aaee…? “
Ratna ne Manu ko apni baanho mey baandha, chuma, chttar uchhala aur kabab diya…
“ mujhe theek theek nahi maalum kyo, lekin mere dada jee aapke iss gaaon bahut aate hai..kareeb kareeb daily hee. Lekin mai iss se pahle kabhi nahee aaee...Peechhle ek saal yaa uss se jyada samay se dada se aapke aur Mansi didi ke baarey mey bahut sunnti thee. Yah bhee suna kee gaao kee kamsin ladkiyo se lekar shaadi shuda , bachche waali aurate bhee tumse pyar karne ke liye tarasti hai...mere gaaon kee 3-4 ladkiyo kee shaadi iss gaaon mey hai, wey sab bhee tumhare baarey mey bahut batati thee aur sunte sunte meri jawani tumse milne ke liye machalne lagi tnee. Chaudhrani ne jub kaha kee tum 1-2 din mey aa jaaoge to mai tumse pyar kerne ke liye yanha aa gaee…..aur kareeb 12-13 dino baad tum mujhe pyar kar rahe ho….”
Manu ne jor kaa dhakka lagaya….
“ ouchh thoda dheere...chaudhrani ne mujhe yanha laakar bahut badhia kiya...ab tum mere andar ho aur sach Manu, bhagwan kasam ..shayad iss se jyada maza, badhia maza aur kuchh ho hee nahi sakta…”
Ratna ne 2 baar chauudhrani word address kiya thaa. Manu ne puchha kee ye chaudhrani kaun hai….
“ arrey apni Mansi didi, wo chaudhry saahab kee beti hai iss liye hamare ghar aur gaaon ke loag didi ko chaudhrani kahte hai..lekin mai didi kahti hu….”
Manu iss kamseen ladki ko aaram se pel raha thaa aur dono ladkiya dheere dheere open ho gaee thee, khulkar baate kar rahi thee,Ratna ne yah bhee bataya kee Mansi uss ke ghar 2 baar aaee hai aur dono baar gaaon ke kuchh aur loag Mansi se milne aaye.
“ Manu bhaiya, aaj ke prograam kaa saara kaam, khana banana, sazawat, cultural prograam , safai sabhi kuchh Mansi didi ne hamare gaaon ke logo se hee karwaya….”
Teeno ladkiyo , Seema, Sapna aur Ratna ne Mansi ke baarey mey jo kuchh kaha wo sab sunkar Manu ko lagne laga kee wo jis Mansi ko jaanta hai, jisey bahut pyar karta hai wo koi dusri Mansi hai, inn ladkiyo kee Mansi didi nahi...Manu ne maathe par jyada jor nahi diya, kamsin jawani ka bharpur, sandhesh kaa pura maza liya...dusri ladkiyo kee tarah khub jum kar choda aur Ratna jor jor se haafne lagi...Sirf Manu ko hee nahi Sapna ko bhee laga kee Ratna ab jhadne wali hai, thandi honeye waali hai….
“ Sapna , tu taiyar hai kee baahar jaakar Seema ko chodu…”
Manu kee baat phir Sapna ko chhubh gaee…
“ mujhe maalum hai, mai kaali kaluti hu, mujhe nahi pyar karoge..tumhe sirf gori chikni chamdi chahiye..jaao jisse chodna hai chodo….”
Manu ne muskurate huye jamakar Ratna ko kuchh aur dhakka maara aur Ratna bilkul past ho gaee, haath paaon phaila diya …
“ buss Manu bhaiya, swarg mey pahuch gaee, yanhi rahne do….”
Ratna ne aankh bund kar lee. Kuchh aur dhakke lagakar Manu ne lawda baahar nikala...aur bina kuchh boley swiftly Sapna ko Ratna ke legs ke beech kutia pose mey kiya…
“ Sapna rani, jaisa maine tera choot chuma chata thaa, tu Ratna ke choot kaa maza le, tum sab Mansi kee dost ho to uske jaisa bano, kabhi uss se bolna,..mujhse bhee badhia se choot chategi, chodegi tum sab ko….”
Manu ne kaha aur Sapna ke mouth ko Ratna ke choot par dabaya., ek- do minutes ke liye dono ladkiya sharmaee lekin phir Sapna taiyar ho gaee...wo thandi choot ke slit par tongue chalane lagi aur Manu peechhe se Sapna kee choot ko chatne chusne laga...lekin jyada der nahi, Sapna kee choot chudai dekhte dekhte geeli ho gaee thee...neeche floor par khade hokar Manu ne Sapna ke bur mey lawda pela aur jum kar tab tak choda jab tak Sapna ne sambhala...Sapna bhee past ho gaee … Manu ne Sapna ko alag kiya aur sidha Ratna ko dubara choda…..iss baar Ratna ne chuttar uchhkaate huye, Manu ke body ko sahlaate huye khub maze se aur jyada der tak chudwaya...aur phir past ho gaee,
Manu dono ladkiyo ke beech flat ho gaya aur dono se lawda chusne ko kaha...dono ladkiyo ne bina koi hesitation ke lawda ko upar se neeche tak, tip par , baals ko , Manu ke inner thighs ko khub chata, chuma aur Manu phir paani girane laga…
Dono ladkiyo ne thoda resist kiya lekin Manu ne dono ke mouth mey paani giraya aur unhe swallow karne le liye kaha…
“ agar chudai kaa pura maza lena hai, mardo ko apne buss mey karna hai to apne mard kaa ras peeti raho, swallow karti raho...meri maa Champa jaisa hamesha khubsurat , jawan aur mast rahogi….”
Dono ladkiyo ne Manu ko apne beech mey liya, uske upar ek ek taang chadhakar aankhe bund kar lee. Manu bhee ab koi chudai nahi chahta thaa...wo wonhi ladkiyo ke beech raha, kuchh der mey dono ladkiya so gaee lekin Manu ko nind nahi aaee…
Altaaf aur Aayush ke baad Manu ke pareshani ke list mey Mansi kaa bhee naam jhud gaya. Wo sochne laga kee
Mansi ne anjaan ladkiya Seema aur Sapna ko apne saath kyo rakha , wo bhee dono ke ghar mey critical problem honeye ke baad, Seema ke bhai kaa murder ho gaya aur Sapna kaa baap hospital mey hai, security officer case alag se…
Mansi iss Ratna ke ghar kyo jaati hai, wonha ke logo se kyo milti hai, Ratna ke gaaon ke logo se hee kaam kyo karwaya ?
Gruh pravesh mey kaee eise loag theye jinhe Mansi ne invite kiya thaa aur Manu unhe nahi jaanta thaa..
Ajju ( husband of chhoti bahu ) uss shaam mandir mey Mansi se itna ghulmil kar kyo mila ?
aur sabse badi baat, murders aur kidnapping ke liye Mansi, ek 19 saal kee ladki par case kyo chala..?
Manu ke paas koi jawab nahi thaa...ussey laga kee agar jyada sochega to uska maatha phut jaayega...ladkiyo ko dheere se apne se alag kar Manu nanga hee baahar aa gaya..dekha kitchen mey Seema aur Mansi hai...chai bana rahi hai...Mansi ne bhee dekha,
“ kyo beta, mujhe choda so choda, meri teeno sahelio ko bhee ragad liya, kaun kutia sabse badhia hai…? “
Mansi ne kitchen se hee comment kiya. Manu bhee kitchen gaya aur Mansi ke saamne Seema ko chuma, Mansi ke chuchio ko masalte huye kaha,
“ tumne apni iss bahan ko uss harami buddhe guruji se kyo chudwaya, mere liye wait nahi kar sakti thee...ye Seema tujhse bhee badhia maal hai...mai isse apne saath kolkatta le jaaunga..”
Mansi ne garam chimta uthakar, Manu ko deekhate huye kaha,
“ aaj jo kaha so kaha, phir kabhi meri iss gudia ( Seema ) ko mujse alag karne kaa socha bhee to lawda ko daag dungi...hatthu bhee nahi maar paayega...jitna chodna hai, gaand maarna hai maaro lekin khabardaar isse mujhse alag karne kaa socho bhee mut . “
Mansi kaa baat sunn Seema bhee Manu ko chhod kar Mansi se chipak gaee ..tabhi door par knock huaa…
Mansi ne pura punjabi dress pahna thaa aur Seema ne sirf panty...Manu nanga thaa.
“ abhi, itna sabere kaun aaya, tum dono andar jaao..”
Bolte huye Mansi door kholne gaee...Seema aur Manu andar gaye…
“ arrey Poonam didi aap, itna sabere sabere, kitna baja “
Mansi ne wall clock kee taraf dekha…
“ saadhe 5 ( 5.30 ) huye hai, aap kanha jaa rahi hai…”
Mansi kaa sentence khatam huaa aur Manu baahar aa gaya jaisa thaa waisa bilkul nanga…
Poonam ne ek jhalak Manu kee oar dekha , Poonam kee aankho se aansu gir rahe theye...Poonam ne kaha ,
“ tum yanha randi pana kar rahe ho aur wonha teri sabse badi randi Sabina, teri Sabbo shayad ab tak mar chuki ho…”
Poonam kee baat sunte hee Manu kaa chehra pila pad gaya, wo ladkhadane laga, Mansi ne sambhala…
“ kya ant sant bol rahi ho didi, subah subah eisa mazak theek nahi …”’
Gaaon ke dusre logo kee tarah Mansi bhee Poonam kee bahut ijjat karti thee.
Mansi ne Poonam ko bhee bed par bithaya aur sab puchha. Poonam ne kaha…
“ mai yanha function mey nahi aaee thee, in fact kisee ne humey inform bhee nahi kiya, invite karne kee baat to dur, mai aaee thee sirf Manu se kahne kee uski Sabbo bahut bimaar hai, doctors ne jabaab de diya hai…kal subah usse chhod kar aaee to uski haalat bahut kharaab thee, .mujhe to darr hai kee shayad wo marr na gaee ho…Sabbo ne kasam tee thee kee Manu ko khabar naa karu, lekin mere dil ne nahi maana …mai wapas jaa rahi hu abhee ,,,.”
Poonam loudly roney lagi. Manu chupchaap uthaa aur andar gaya...5-7 minutes baad hee baahar aaya, trouser aur shirt, shoe pahankar…
“ Poonam, juldi chal...meri Sabbo ko kuchh nahi hoga, wo bilkul theek ho jaayegi…”
Mansi tukur tukur Manu ko dekhti rahi, naa wo, naa Seema chahti thee kee Manu itni juldi kolkatta wapas jaaye lekin kuchh boli nahi. Mansi jaanti thee kee Manu ke dil mey Sabina ke liye kitna pyar hai kitni ijjat hai, shayad chhoti bahu se bhee jyada…
Seema chai kaa trey lekar aee , Poonam aur Manu naa naa karte rahe…
“ agar tum loag chai nahi peeoge to mai jahar khakar marr jaaungi….”
Seema ne kaha .
Sabne chai piya aur subah 6.00 ke pahle Poonam kee car chal dee
Driver ke bagal mey ek gunman baitha thaa aur peeche Poonam aur Manu…..
Raste mey ek jagah thodi der ke liye car ruki aur 12.30 baje car Surana ke ghar ke portico mey ruki….
Ye wedness day thaa lekin Saumya college nahi gaee thee. Manu ko dekhte hee Saumya ludly rotey huye galey mili aur rotey huye kaha ,
“ Manu, mai tujhe chhod dungi, tumse kabhi nahi milungi, kabhi baat nahi karungi lekin meri Sabina, meri bahan ko bacha lo ...mai uske bina jinda nahi rah sakti...pl apne bhagwan se kahkar usse bacha lo…”
Manu ne kareeb 14 din baad Sabina ko dekha, ussey laga wo apni khubsurat, mast , bindaas Sabina ko nahi kisee saalo se bimaar aurat ko dekh raha hai,,,rang bilkul feeka pad gaya thaa, aankhe dhans gaee thee, gaal pichak gaye theye...dono haatho se paani, medicine uski body mey jaa raha thaa, urination ke liye bhee pipe laga thaa.
Manu ne doctor se puchha…
“ today is 5th day of her unconsciousness….”
Poonam ne bataya,
“ tum budhwar ko subah yanha se gaao ke liye nikle aur ussee shaam ko Sabbo hostel mey behosh hokar gir gaee...ek ghante ke andar yanha ke sabse bade hospital mey le gaye,,, agle din subah hosh aaya aur sabse pahle usne yahi kaha kee kisee bhee haalat mey tumhe khabar naa kiya jaaye,..doctors ne bahut test kiya, experts aaye aur sabne ek hee baat kahi kee ladki ko koi physical problem nahi, sirf mental problem hai. “
Poonam ne Manu kaa maatha sahlaate huye kaha ,
“ doctors ne kaha kee Sabina andar se bahut dukhi hai..bilkul tut gaee hai, koi bimari nahi hai iss liye doctors ne ghar le jaane ke liye kaha….2 din hosh mey rahi phir saniwar kee sham se behosh hai...ab tum sambhalo apni bhagwan ko…”
Poonam aur Saumya hee nahi Manu bhee samajh chuka thaa kee Sabbo ko kya bimari hai…
“ Manu ke pyar aur chudai ke liye bimaar ho gaee thee. “
Manu aur Poonam chale gaye aur idhar Seema aur Mansi bahut udas ho gaee.
Kareeb ek ghante baad chaaro ladkiya naye ghar mey pahuchi.
Wonha sabhi uth chuke theye aur chai pee rahe theye. Mansi ko dekhte hee Tabbu ne Manu ke baarey mey puchha….
“ Manu kanha hai , usse bhee bula lo..”
Lekin ab ye Mansi kal waali hansti khilkhilati Mansi nahi thee. Usne curtly jabaab diya,
“ mujhe kya pata kee Manu kanha hai, kis ke saath hai, mai kya uski gharwali hu…”
Manu kolkatta chala gaya iss liye Mansi dukhi thee aur bahut naaraaz bhee. Apna gussa mehmaano par utaara.
Wo apne room jaana chahti thee lekin tabhi Vinod aur wakil sahab bhee taiyaar hokar aa gaye. Dono bahut khush theye.
Vinod ko dekhte hee Mansi phir normal ho gaee. Maids Vinod aur wakil ke liye chai lekar aaee lekin Mansi ne unhe mana kar diya aur Seema se chai banane ke liye kaha…aur wakil se puchha ,
“ wakil saahab , aapko pura fees mil gaya yaa nahi…? “
“ madam , thank you very much, maine jitna demand kiya thaa uss se bahut jyada mil gaya, I am very much pleased…”
Mansi ne muskurate huye Mamta kee oar dekha jo sharmaate huye aankh jhuka kar baithee thee...eise hee baate hoti rahi, Altaaf ke abbu , ammi bhee Vinod ke ghar se aa gaye.
Seema maids ko saath le sabke liye chai lekar aayee, Mansi ne khud Vinod aur wakil ko chai diya.
“ wah….madam, aapke gaao kee baat hee kuchh aur hai, ek se ek badhia khubsurat loag, badhia khana pina aur ab ye chai, jindgi mey iss se badhia chai , itna tasty chai kabhi nahi piya….sach mai bahut hee khush hu...ek cup aur chahiye…”
Mansi ne Seema ke kamad mey haath daal kar kaha ,
“ aakhir banaya kisne hai, meri pyari bahan ne..”
Nasta paani huaa aur at around 8.30 wakil sabko prannam kar car mey baith gaye. Mansi ne dekha kee Birju hee wakil ke car mey driver ke jagah par baitha hai…
“ Birju , tum kyo drive kar rahe ho, wakil saahab kaa driver kanha gaya…? Tum chale jaaoge to mera kaam kaun karega..? “
Mansi kee baat sunn Birju bahut khush huaa aur Vinod ne rightly socha kee Mansi ke jaisee khatarnaak koi aur nahi.
“ iss 19 saal kee ladki mey lomri jaisee itni chaalaki kanha se aaee? “
Mansi kee baat sunn Vinod ne kaha kee wakil saahab kaa driver bimaar ho gaya hai, wo apne gaaon wapas chala gaya.
“ Mansi, tu 10-10.30 baje mere ghar aana, maa ko tujhse kuchh bahut jaruri kaam hai…”
Mansi se yah kah Vinod bhee apne ghar chala gaya. Phir sabhi wapas ghar ke andar aaye aur Mansi ne sabke saamne Champa ko charge kiya,
“ mai ne tujhse kaha thaa kee koi aaye yaa naa aaye Rekha didi ko jarur bulana, wo kyo nahi aaee...tumne ussey bulaya ? “
Mansi kee chilled, kadak awaaj sunn sabhi sakpaka gaye.Champa ne dheere se kaha,
“ nahi beti, hamne Rekha ko nahi bulaya, kisee bahar waale ko nahi bulaya.”
Champa kaa jabaab sunn Mansi kaa paara chadh gaya. Wo gusse se kaampne lagi…usne ek nazar Altaaf ke ghar ke logo ko dekha aur kaha,
“ saali, jindgi bhar Rekha, Poonam aur Puna ko apni beti bolti rahi aur ab wey sab baahar waale ho gaye aur ye sab ( pointing to in laws of Mamta ) tere apne hai,tu ye bhee bhul gaee kee iss makaan kee jamin kiski hai, kisne yah ghar banwaya hai ? ”
Seema ne Mansi kaa haath pakadna chaha lekin Mansi ne jhatak diya, aur bilkul thandi awaaj mey boli
“ agar 24 ghante ke andar ghar ke jamin kee puri kimmat aur iss makaan kee puri kimat tuney sethji ko nahi dee, mujhe receipt nahi dikhaya to yaad rakh 24 ghante ke baad iss makaan kaa naamo nishan nahi rahega.”
Mansi kee baat sunn sabhi awaak rah gaye, ek dusre kee taraf dekhne lage, Champa ne nazare jhuka lee thee. Wo apni betio ko , Unke sasural baalo ko bulana chahti thee lekin munim ne mana kar diya thaa. Munim waise kabhi jor se, loudly nahi bolta thaa lekin kahte hai naa kee
“ jab gidar kee maut aati hai wo sahar kee oar bhaagta hai..”
wo chilla kar bola ,
“ tum ( Mansi ) hoti kaun ho , naa tum iss ghar kee beti ho aur naa bahu, jabardasti ghar par kabza jama kar rakha hai, ghar ko dharam- shala bana diya hai, hamara ghar hai , hamari marzi , hum kisse bulaye kisse nahi...ye hamara ghar hai humne banbaaya hai...hum kisee ko paisa kyo de….”
Mansi ne ghur kar munim ko dekha, Mamta aur Champa ko bhee munim kee baat bilkul achchhee nahi lagi..lekin dono chup rahe…
Mansi ne apni sahelio kee oar dekha, Phulwa bhee wonhi thee…
“ ladkiyo, chalo ye dharamshaala nahi hai, yanha hamare liye koi jagah nahi hai….”
Mansi ne 2 kadam aagey badhaya lekin Phulwa pahle hee ghar ke baahar nikal gaee . Mansi ne palat kar Champa se kaha ,
“ sirf 24 ghante, mujhe receipt aur ghar aur jamin kee saare kaagjaat chahiye…aur agar nahi dikhaya to kal hee iss makaan kee jagah par sirf into ( bricks ) kaa dher dikhega.”
Munim phir bola,
“ tu ghar se baahar jaa, phir kabhi yanha mut aana, jab se ghar mey aaee hai , koi naa koi pareshani ho hee rahi hai…”
Ye munim nahi, Mansi ke liye uska guilt bol raha thaa, Mansi ne apni marzi se uss se nahi chudwaya, Seema aur Sapna ko nahi chod saka, Mansi ke karan 11 aadmiyo kaa lawda chusna pada, unke lawda ka paani pina pada wo bhee Mansi ke saamne, ..wo apne ko bahut hee kamzor samajh raha thaa..uss din sabke saamne Mansi ko insult karne ka mauka mil raha tha.
Munim kee baat sunn Mansi main door tak aa gaee tab Mamta kee saas ne kaha,
“ Mansi beti, hum teri bahan, apni bahu ko wapas le jaana chahte hai “
Mansi ne apna dono kaan pakadte huye jabaab diya,
“ maine bahut badi galti kee , kee Mamta ko saath lekar aaee, aapki bahu hai..jub chahe, janha chahe le jaaeeye, ghar kee bahu banaa kar rakhiye yaa ghar mey hee randi banaaeeye aap sab kee marzi, Champa bhee jaana chaahe to le jaaeeye…”
Mansi ghar ke baahar nikal gaee, baahar Phulwa khadi thee, usne Mansi kaa haath pakda aur dono wanha se chal diye...Mansi apni saheli ko lekar apni maa ke paas pahuchi.
Udhar Mansi ke baahar jaate hee Sapna ne kaha,
“ Champa kaki, ye ghar bahut manhoos hai, ghar ban-na shuru hua, munim bimar ho gaya, Mansi ke upar itna bada case chala, mere ghar mey, iss ghar ko banaane waale aadmi ke ghar lut maar huee..bahut manhoos ghar hai ye..
Sapna chup huee to Seema ne kaha,
“ mausi, aapne mujhe maa se jyada pyar diya lekin hum Mansi didi se dur , unse alag nahi rah sakte..chal Sapna, chal Ratna…”
Champa chup chaap roo rahi thee, teeno ladkiyo ko ghar se baahar jaate dekhti rahi, Mamta bhee bahut dukhi thee, pahli baar ussey apne baap par, munim par gussa aa raha thaa.
Dusri taraf Mamta kaa husband aur uski nanad kaa husband dukhi ho gaya Mansi ko ghar chhod kar jaate dekh. Dono hee Mansi ko chodna chahte theye...
Teeno ladkiyo ke baahar jaate hee Mamta kee nanad ne Manu ke baarey mey puchha,
“ ghar kaa beta, Manu kanha hai, wo rahta to ye sab nahi hota…”
Mamta ne bhee Manu ke liye puchha aur kaha
“Manu agar Mansi ke saath nahi hai to phir aakhir gaya kanha, kiske saath hai ? , “
Tab ek maid ne jabaab diya kee jab wo subah subah baahar ghumne gaee thee to dekha kee Manu maalik ek car mey ek bahut hee khubsurat aurat ke saath baithe hai , car gaao ke baahar jaa rahi thee...Mamta samajh gaee..
“ haa Poonam ne kaha thaa kee subah subah hee chali jaayegi, lagta hai wo Manu ko saath le jaane ke liye hee aaee thee. “
hello dear. is bat me koi doubt nhi k ap best writer he. muje ye b nhi pata k is kahani me next kia ho raha he. me ne champa k pehle 3 parts parhe or ab ye wala par raha ho. me bahot peche ho is liye comment nhi kia jab apse ik sath ho jaonga tab har update par comment hoga. me ab yahi khna chahta ho k is story me manu ko hero our mansi champa ko heroine bana do manu ko is story me god banado ta k wo har chez ko control kar sake