Adultery मेरी पत्नी और मसाज वाला

[mohitkumarhot]

first half was awesome... but in second half you rushed the story so much that Sneha ultimately seemed like a slut than a reluctant, shy wife whom you portrayed very well in the first half. It almost felt like I m reading 2 different stories with different women. Sad to see that you wanted to end the story so much.

sorry for that ,but dont you saw the above conversation
ek baar moond kharab to fir vapas mann nahi lagta,or me un writer me nahi hu jo story ko bich me chodd de,isiliye jaldi baazi me pura kiya ,kabhi mann hua to aage badauga

thanks for reading the story carefully