Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
(19-09-2021, 08:33 PM)krish_999 Wrote: No update today, bro. I hope tomorrow there will be one.

I am aware readers are losing interest in the story. I think it will be okay in a couple of updates. Since the story is well past halfway, it's not very easy to write. I have to remember details from the earlier chapters and bring them back to complete the circle. There are always loose ends that need to be tied. I was trying to finish this chapter by Thursday itself, but it was a futile attempt. I needed more time, even though it's a smaller chapter.
Please be patient.
My sincere apologies to whoever felt cheated by the way the story has turned into, especially after taking it so high. But I would also like to thank all of those who've voiced their sincere response. Criticism will make my story writing only better. I hope I will turn their response in my favour in the upcoming chapters. Always remember, whatever happens in the story happens for a reason. I enjoy the guessing game of readers; some are perfectly right, whereas some are ridiculously foolish. But I don't add events to the story to keep you guessing always. Nowadays I don't add any new things/twists to the story. All I need to write about it repurcusions of previous events.
Thank you all readers. 

Keep reading and keep posting.
Love.

Good to see some writers at least are a sport for criticism, No one should tolerate personal comments but a healthy discussion on a story written means people love the story.

"Criticism will make my story writing only better. I hope I will turn their response in my favour in the upcoming chapters"

Am sure only you have the capability to do that, assuming you keep the love intact between the lead couple and make sure our hero learns to respect love though he learns it hard way!
My guess for this story on the whole is Meera goes past through her struggles and urges and brings back old Krish and changes her husband eventually, how she does that remains to be seen in rest of the story. If the couple end up open relationship then like other stories this one might not be a good read since the whole story lives and breathes through the love portrayed by this couple in all parts.

"Always remember, whatever happens in the story happens for a reason"

Granted this is true in your stories, I still think you have written few conversations by Meera and few from Krish which went against their nature itself...Meera we knew never gives up herself to a stranger unless approved by Krish , if that's not the case she would have given up herself in the train episode nor Meera we know never commits to a person or infatuates on attention from someone she barely knows whom her husband doesn't initiate her to commit like in case of Ashish.
Maybe you have your reasons to include Meera and Ashish now probably to give more significant role to Ashish later in the story but the way he got Meera in that episode kind of drowned the hype and efforts put by Desai and brought down all readers hopes expecting for some kind of romance between Desai & Meera if not complete showdown... so i still stand by my words that those chapters were not well thought off on the whole.

"All I need to write about it repercussions of previous events."

Good, these comments prove my thoughts as well on this story, Damage has already been done by Krish and by Meera with Ashish, now only consequences for the couple.
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Chapter-1 - by krish_999 - 10-10-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: Chapter-1 - by Givemeextra - 10-10-2020, 11:00 AM
Chapter - 2 - by krish_999 - 17-10-2020, 01:04 AM
Chapter - 3 - by krish_999 - 23-10-2020, 11:52 PM
Chapter-5 - by krish_999 - 04-11-2020, 11:47 PM
Chapter - Six - by krish_999 - 12-11-2020, 07:57 PM
Chapter-7 - by krish_999 - 19-11-2020, 07:11 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 24-11-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 25-11-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 10:00 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 11:05 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by RCF - 20-09-2021, 09:55 PM



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