[amirrulezmir]

great going .... but kindly do not end the story suddenly as done by several other authors like aurelius1982 or shiprat or rupanita.

you have great writing skills and i know you can explore more with creativity.

i would suggest you make meera pregnant from desai as i think the story is heading that way. show the dilemma of krish and meera.
how desai visits meera at home or office or lunch or cars as her pregnancy increases.
how desai takes advantages from her and visits even after the baby is born until his or her next few birthdays.
show the dilemma of desai for is illegitimate biological son.

and do show how meera becomes possesive for her unborn baby and his biological father against krish and how krish deals with it.

kindly do not do fast forward time jump in between first month of prenancy and baby's few birthdays.. few months is ok and

please do not get meera married to desai unlike other stories and authors.