Revathi - An angel

[Tirath2189]

Dear Friend,

I am sorry to say that your story is gradually heading towards a dead end.
I do like the character Raj, but again and again (until almost a submission on the part of Revathi!). 
Raj hither Raj thither ...
It is monotonous and slowly but also boring...

I think that charity and sexual-emotional love are very different.
Finally Revathi is neither a prist nor a temple head nor a female guru... 

In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda 

I agree