25-08-2021, 11:25 PM
(25-08-2021, 11:17 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Brilliant comeback post brother.the encounter scene between Namrata and Das were just wowww,jyada kuch baatchit nahi lekin mohoul garam kar diya Das ke havbhav aur expression se aur Namrata ke sundarata ka varnan to bahot badhiya tha.
Bas ek cheez mujhe khataki ke agar Namrata wo buddha aadami kon Hain ye pata nahi hota to aur maja aa jata,kyunki Namrata ko ab das ke intetion ka thoda andaza lag gaya hain agar ye na hota to Jo das karata wo Namrata ke liye surprise hota jaise Birju encouter main hua.Anyways aage kya hota hain ye dekhna bahot interesting hoga.
Das to ab dance pe chance maarega.
Byw I am reading your story once again and found that in update 4 Namrata ke mom naam Madhuri type hua instead of Suchita.
Eagerly waiting for next episode,Stay safe keep rcking.
Brother aapke jaisa reader maine ab tak nahi dekha ( honestly speaking ) thanks for your suggestions , response , review, support
and apko boht sare plot Holes milenge agar aap story vapis read kar rahe honge toh , because this is my first story and jab start kiya tha toh koi Idea nahi tha bas joh man ko accha lagta aur likhne me maja ata voh likh deta tha but pata nahi tha ye story ko itne bade margine me likhunga
Actually maine starting ke kuch update main namrta ke mom ko as a madhuri dixit imagine kiya tha apko pics bhi milenge madhuri ke but later voh character mujhe boht glamourous imagine hone laga that's y maine bad me simple name rakh diya
Thank you once again , keep supporting