22-08-2021, 03:58 PM
(22-08-2021, 12:09 AM)Sush44 Wrote: Welcome Royalking Bhai..??
apke laut aane se is platform me ek nayi jaan daldi hai..??
namrata ki journey jo aapne abhi tak twist and turn se likhi hai wo abhi tak kamaal hai..muze malum hai ki uski aage ki journey bhi aisi hi kamaal ki hogi..
kuch suggestions:
story jaisi likhi hai waisi hi continue karo..abhi ke namrata ke saath relation sirf casual hi rakho..Karan ki blackmailing jada mat badao..Karan ka character kam kardo..RAGA ya Das Sir character interesting rahega..muze lag raha hai ki RAGA aur das sir dono ko bhi barabar chance milna chahiye..lekin end mein dono me se ek namrata ko pura pata hai ye likh sakhte ho...
side by side namrata ke flashback me Birju, Savla comparative roll mein kidhar the ye bhi dikha sakthe ho..
hope ye journey surwaat se end tak apni sima tak pohochegi..???
royalking bhai apko fir se ek baar shubh kamanaye aapke story ke liye..?✌✌ hum apke follower apka hamesh saath denge..??
Thanks brother and thanks for suggestion