21-08-2021, 04:14 PM
(21-08-2021, 01:28 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: DEAR READERS......
AAPKE comments padh ke boht accha laga iss kahani ke prati apka prem aur connection main samjh raha hu issiliye main yaha ye story continue karunga
Boht lambe gap ki vajah se thoda recap dekh lete hain
Iss kahani ki kuch main character hain jinhe humne DIWALI ENCOUNTER ISS SAGA main developed hote dekha jaise ki
1) NAMRATA
2) SUCHITA
3) BIRJU (WATCHMEN OF SOCIETY, DEAD IN PRESENT )
4) SAVLA ( SERVENT OF NAMRATA'S FAMILY)
Aur iss saga main kuch supportive character the
5) ABDUL ( suchita's lover )
6) SANJAY ( NAMRATA'S father)
Iss DIWALI ENCOUNTER SAGA ka response next level tha aur ye mera personal favourite bhi hain
Iske bad aayi "SAFAR SAGA " joh ek successful experiment tha
Isme hamne
SUCHITA ka hard-core encounter dekha ek gande Bhikari se train ke toilet main ( jaha SUCHITA ko bad main samjha voh Bhikari se pregnant toh nahi huvi ? )
Aur ye experiment SUCHITA lovers ko kafi pasand aaya joh ek total fantasy writing thi as a writer maine pehli bar kuch alag likha tha
Second half of story main hamne ek naye lead character ko dekha
1)DCP MISHRA
Jisne iss kahani ki main lead NAMRATA ko uske jawani ka maja diya ( ya NAMRATA ne liya )
Aurr iss point pe kahani present se past main chali gayi
" NMARTA EK PAHELI " ISS saga main jisme hamne ab tak 3 episode dekhe aur boht sare new characters
1) VARSHA ( NAMRATA'S CLG FRND)
2) ABHI ( NAMRATA'S BF)
4) RAGA ( CHAPRASI / BHIKARI)
5) PROFESSOR DAS
6) Karan
7) UNKNOWN CHARACTER IN KHANDAR
yaha tak kahani aake ruki hain par iss scenario ko maine tab socha tha aur ek writer ke ideas badlte rehte hain so in characters main se boht se character ka ab jikra bhi nahi hoga aage jake so ye chij as a reader aap samjh lena
Aur current ongoing story main NAMRATA ek khandar main ja rahi hain aur ek unknown character vaha NAMRATA ka wait kar raha hain joh character mere liye bhi unknown hain
@AVENSHARONNY bhai ne iss character ko kafi acche se explain kiya hain upar vale comment main unhone possibility diyi ki vaha koi bhi ho sakta hain
Jaise ki
Professor Das
Clg ka peon
Clg ka koi aadmi
Unknown bhikari / baba / fake pujari joh NAMRATA ko janta ho
So aap sabke upar main ek kam chod raha hu aapke fantasy aur logic ke hisab se uss unknown character main aap kise dekhte hain joh clg aur NAMRATA se sambandh rakhta ho because aage ki sari kahani past main chalegi joh NAMRATA ko develop karega
Plz comment for that character
After that sotry ka update aayega
Kon hoga uss KHANDAR main ?
Jiss ke liye NAMRATA dance ke bad clg ke piche vale KHANDAR main pasine se lat pat hoke ja rahi hain
Aapke jawab ka intajar rahega
ROYALKINGFIRE.
WELCOME BACK ROYALKINGFIRE
thanks for this recap but apki kahani itni dimag me beth chuki he ki iski jarurat nahi padi par isme bhi kuch important likha he apne
I think aapne direct keh diya ki filhaal me jo character introduce huve the like abhi , Karan , raga inko bhul jao or dimag me mat lo
So i can understand aap sirf us unknown khandar vale character par focus kar rahe ho and it's good for us because hame Namrata ka origin dekhna hae uski paheli dekhni he so i think
Voh character clg se related hona chahiye like
Clg ka peon , worker or profesor
But according to your writing theme character low class hona chahiye and little bit older because aise he logo ne namrta ko open up kiya he so my final suggestion is
Old peon or old professor .