21-08-2021, 12:54 PM
(19-08-2021, 08:51 PM)themaskeditor Wrote: BTW I love the character and exploits of suchita. Also being your first story you have nailed it.
(19-08-2021, 10:43 PM)B123z Wrote: Hamm sir jii ap kalakar or ham raider ham galtiya bi nikalnge or wah wai bi karnge so ap khud hi apni lqst upadte dekh ke storyy aage bathaooo nddd
Meri khud ki yahi rai he ki story me jyada carectar aad mat karnaa or jo ladaki or maa jo abi chal raha hi men roll me rakhnaa
(19-08-2021, 11:40 PM)raja shri Wrote: @royalkingfire story apki jabardast hai....mere suggestions se tumne story Jha roki thi ...whi se continue kro dost....
Story apki hai yr.....so jaisa tumne socha hai ...waisa likho....kyuki hr reader ki soch alag hoti hai story ko lekar..... So jitna jldi ho sake come back ....and again continue this story....bahit miss kr rha hu apki sory ke update ko.....
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