Revathi - An angel

[Lollobionda]

Hello Revathi47,

I'm still having a lot of fun and it continues to fill me up when I read your story. 
I want to thank you for that.

However, I still have a few comments to make:

- I find the extensive and intense expressions of courage, respectively, the involvement of Sathya in 
"almost every erotic" eventl between Revathi and Raj (this also applies to other characters who appear 
in this story, such as, for example, Ragav, Kumar, brother etc.) too weary.

*The most beautiful and exciting in such erotic moments are usually those that are forbidden to be hidden.*

- Revathi should slowly lose her anal virginity, (her vagina is reserved only for her love and husband!) 
I mean Raj and/or Ragav maybe Kumar should enjoy Revathi in this way.
Because more "only games between the protagonists and protracted delays" will lead to monotony creeping 
into the story...

It may be that Sathya finds fun in it and humiliates his wife with it, but in my opinion it should remain 
"only" between the two (Sathya and Revathi) and not be mentioned and expressed in the presence 
of a third (in that case Raj, Kumar, Sathya's parents, his brother and his friends).
Otherwise, this explicit story will lose its charm and eroticism....

In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda