16-08-2021, 08:03 PM
(16-08-2021, 03:25 PM)raja shri Wrote: @ajanmol bro...apki story bahut osm hai yr .....sach me apki writing skills ka to me fan ho gya hu......story ka seduction level sach me kabeel e tarif hai .....bs update thode slow aate hai bhai ....and yr ek baat smj nhi aayi update 42(d) me vandana Birju or brijmohan ka scene chl rha tha ....padhkar aisa lg rha tha jaise mere samne ho rha ho.....and uske baad kahani ek dam 15 din forward ho gyi wo to koi baat nhi ......pr vandana 15 din me itni kaise change ho gyi...ki wo teen bando ka saath and Zarine ka saath bhi.......
Vandana hariya , uske sasur or te teesra banda kon tha yr jiska vandana choos rhi thi uska naam nhi btaya tumne ...
Or ye Zarine kon hai koi new character hai kya iske baare me btaiye....and vandana to hariya se gussa thi fir uske paas kaise pahuch gyi.....bhai sawal bahut se hai jinke jawab agr aap denge to badi meharbani hogi apne fan. Pr...suspense acha diya aapne ....bhai ek request hai agr isme incent bhi aad ho jaye to or jyada maza aaye .....kyuki bahar to wo maza le hi rhi h pr ghr ka maza hi alag hai...baap ke saath bhi kuch dikhao yr ....and aage dekhte hai kya hota hai...bs aap update regular dijiye,? yhi icca hai aapse ...
Thankyou bro...aapne jo bhi mere liye kaaha....or rahi baat 15 din k forward k liye to haa maine ye kiya bt ab story wapas se purani track par chalegi....jisme apke saare sawal ke jawab aajayenge....or mai filhal busy hu isliye update nahi de paaraha iske loye sorry....or mai pehle bhi bol chukaa hoo or ab fir bol raaha hu ki story complete jaroor hogi bas mujhe bhi thoda time dijiye......or ek baat mai incest fan ni hu isliye mai ye theme par nahi likhta story....khaas kar ke maa beta or baap beti ke upar.....i hope aap samjhenge.....saath bane rahiyega aage bhi....
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