13-08-2021, 12:45 PM
So hot story. Very good narration. Good going.
Suggestions-
1. Make long SENSUAL conversation between Jaya and Arvind. Let Jaya and Arvind PASSIONATELY LOVE each other.
2. Jaya always compare between Arvind and her late husband and eventually grows more love for Arvind.
3. Jaya shows motherly affection and cares more for Renu than Alok.
4. Focus more on BIG, HEAVY, AMPLE BOOBS of Jaya.
Suggestions-
1. Make long SENSUAL conversation between Jaya and Arvind. Let Jaya and Arvind PASSIONATELY LOVE each other.
2. Jaya always compare between Arvind and her late husband and eventually grows more love for Arvind.
3. Jaya shows motherly affection and cares more for Renu than Alok.
4. Focus more on BIG, HEAVY, AMPLE BOOBS of Jaya.