Adultery How my Conservative Tamil Wife wanted to became his 1 day Wife

[manasi]

While starting to read your story, I anticipated you to write only the real incidents. Definitely, you could hide the facts where you were uncomfortable.

However, you have fallen into cheap prey of fantasy added to your story. You are cooking incidents as per order of the readers. The thrill and charm of reading your story is lost. There are many cuckold stories in net beautifully written and love making scenes are embedded quite unrealistically. Your story, now becomes a nonsense.

If you are so interested to write a cuckold story from your imagination, you could very well opened another thread to bloom your imagination. Its all waste in this thread.

If possible, correct the following.

1. Stick to real incidents avoiding imagination.
2. Don't fall prey to wishes to readers. If you like to entertain them, open another thread to satisfy them.
3. Edit and delete the portion of your imagination.

I promise, it would be a masterpiece, if and only if, you stick to the truth.

I am sorry, at present, I am disappointed.

Story has Completed. Thanks everyone

If my comment had any bearing on short closure of your story, I request you to follow my suggestions.