17-04-2019, 09:48 PM
(16-04-2019, 11:05 PM)KevinSkywalker Wrote: story is going good.
provide update whenever you have free time to write.
in sometime bavani will be with Vikram,
since it is going to be a long story provide more detailed interaction how bavani got seduced...
though she already dreaming of him add more scenes of seduction.
don't like the idea of husband becoming cockold. As most of the stories ends like that.
hope it have a fantastic ending like the previous story
Thank you for your input. Will try to do the best I can. The husband would definitely not be a cuckold. I always thought the cuckold concept should be sparingly used in a story for it to be effective as a stimulant for eroticism.