17-04-2019, 07:50 PM
Quote:Its a small request, if you could turn this story little towards thriller...let the seducing, let Rakesh take all the advantages the way you planned...in the end, change the climax towards Nidhi...as if she heard the plans of Rakesh while talking to the watchmen and then she does the same thing with him and take revenge and make him go to jail. Her pregnancy is also hidden and aborts - she takes her back all the jewelry's back and make him a learn a lesson.
We keep hearing men dominates women in each story, this will be unique in its own and also pass a message to the community..
Think about it...I just tried explaining in few words but you can change in a good plot..
Casanova73..