27-07-2021, 09:42 PM
(27-07-2021, 06:37 PM)Samit_bhai Wrote: I don't think so..it's a good stuff..story monotonous banane se accha naye kirdar pesh karo..
Agar appko ek hi character ki story padhne ka shauk hai to plz read zeba housewife , saniya etc.
Iss story ko lionking ko jaise chalana hai chalane do..
Mere prob ye hai jab se maine kahani likhna shuru kari mai ek kirdar ko zyada piche nahi padta change karta ho sex verity lata ho ha risk hota hai flop bhi ho jati hai shuru mai sahi chalne ke bad but I hope ise maine bahot soch kar shuru kara hai aur kafi kuch sex ke bad bhi add karna chahata ho woh maine socha hai